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Flash: Forgive Me, Lover

January 18, 2013 by D. A. Wolf 5 Comments

Once, I was a hot country.

Two times the amber eye of Maker’s Mark, the end of night and only minutes before I chase you away, these sound effects conjured as I contemplate the payoff and another shot, as you pause to catch your breath and wipe the sweat from your neck, as your gaze admires

and you comment sweetly on the heady restraint of my perfume, a condition for our meetings that grow too frequent

though it all comes easier as 90 proof performs its duty, throaty as you seem to like it (each and every one of you)

my rain to reassure you of your prowess through this grainy shower, this dimming light, the proximate glass that is (after all) only mist and breathing; Oh, dear man, my hefty grayed would-be cavalier, your satiny head trying so hard to court me, your talisman buried beneath walls of walrus flesh that you jiggle home to your good woman each night, always on time, always your appetite at the well-laid table, never enough to fill you up, your fat fingers that I kiss with genuine affection fumbling for your bristling and lean imagination; lips rolling to lips like red velvet, your campaign for pleasure, your eagerness to express it all and

playing my part as guaranteed by contract, tussling to readjust for the Friday night flourish, forgive me Lover, but I must glance away wishing for a fourth shot, parting everything you require for the finale, granting my most exquisite sigh, oh brave knight, oh bold hero, oh fine lion heart, somewhere, a treasure,

once, a hot country.

Flash fiction is a very short story of anywhere from 100 to 1,000 words. This is a quick writing exercise. Make of it what you will, but do enjoy…

 
 
Find more fun flash fiction exercises here.
 

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Filed Under: Flash, Sex Tagged With: eroticism, érotisme, flash, Language, not prose, Sex, writing, writing exercise

Comments

  1. Walker Thornton says

    January 19, 2013 at 8:33 am

    Fun! Delightful.. and wonderfully nuanced.

    Reply
  2. Chloe Jeffreys says

    January 19, 2013 at 11:38 pm

    Reading this out loud felt good to my mouth.

    Reply
    • BigLittleWolf says

      January 20, 2013 at 12:13 am

      Glad to hear it, Chloe! (Internal rhymes… playing with a few challenges to myself in that little exercise.)

      Reply
  3. Wolf Pascoe says

    January 20, 2013 at 1:57 pm

    “your campaign for pleasure”
    “Once, I was a hot country”
    “the heady restraint of my perfume”
    “my rain to reassure you of your prowess”
    “fumbling for your bristling and lean imagination”
    “granting my most exquisite sigh”
    “oh fine lion heart, somewhere, a treasure”

    Such a banquet.

    Reply
    • BigLittleWolf says

      January 20, 2013 at 4:46 pm

      A banquet. Thank you for those kind words, Wolf.

      Reply

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